Tuesday, 22 November 2011

the script uses less dialogue because it is easier to to read and its quick and simple.the script uses more stage direction and less dialogue because you want to read the script quick and easy also when you are writing a script you have to use simple English no slang .

Friday, 18 November 2011

beginning:


first we are going to video some of our friends playing football and asking them question whiles they are free styling and passing the ball around.we going to go to a local youth  questioning  about whether football has changed  their life  or not.

middle:

Tuesday, 8 November 2011


  • What is your character's full name? What is their preferred nickname? Yasin nathir 
  • How old is your character throughout the majority of the story?15 year old 
  • What is their date of birth? 10th April 1996
  • What is their place of birth? Mogadishu  Somalia 
  • Are they male or female? male 
  • Where do they live now? Are they married, single, engaged, divorced, widowed?single 
  • Does your character have any brothers or sisters? If so, how many? 2 brothers and 1 sister
  • What is your character's overall health like? very good
  • What type of personality does your character have? perfect personality
  • What is their Ethnic background and religion? Islam,Somalia
  • What is their current occupation? They don't have jobs
  • What level of education does your character have?good one
  • What does your character like or love? love to play football
  • What does your character dislike or hate? he dislikes racism people and drinking

Tuesday, 1 November 2011


 1.EXT. BUS STOP.DAY  
the team are waiting for the manager to come with the coach and drive them to the match INT.COACH .DAY
the player are so excited and at the same time nervous because they about to have a match against a talented team
EXT. OUTSIDE STADIUM.DAY

EXT.FOOTBALL PITCH .DAY
a match against another team, out door match
 EXT.FOOTBALL PITCH 
The boy had a family crisis
EXT.FOOTBALL PITCH 
the boys mum and dad was about to divorce so he was worried when he played the game
EXT. FOOTBALL PITCH 
he  got a red card  and  the manager gets angry  
EXT.FOOTBALL PITCH 
the manager shouts  at him 
EXT.FOOTBALL PITCH 
the boy went late to the game 
 EXT.FOOTBALL PITCH 


paragraph 1


one day a Joe  had a match against another team that time when the boy had the match he had something on his mind he  had a family crisis because his mum and dad wore about to divorce.the boy got so upset that he went late to the match because he was upset and he came late to the match so the manager shouted at him but he still played second half when the team came together. His dreams of becoming a professional footballer seem to be coming true, after years of hoping and practicing. But just when he seems close to living the dream, a shocking event turns his world upside down. Joe  finds himself facing his toughest times yet. He's never been a quitter, but can he rise to the challenge?
paragraph 2

they wore losing 5-0 to the other team because the boy came late and he was the captain of the team so the boy put all his anger in to the game and played so rough that he got a red card for fowling the other player so the manager shouted at him and said was.